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Janice LeCocq's avatar

Great observation. You nailed it. The “corporate speak” (I’d call it “academic speak”) is seductive. As you pointed out, in the academic environment the the speech and writing become increasingly obscure, masking as insight and brilliance! Believe me, I know! I graduated with a PhD and instead of going into academics I went into a small Wall Street firm. I learned very quickly that I had no clue how to write for that community, but I turned around fast and got rid of the “academese”. It’s “get to the point”. One of the most vivid memories is in one of my early presentations to the sales force about a stock I thought they should recommend to their clients….I was about 10% into my presentation (building my argument from the ground up) when the top salesman, sitting opposite me, picked up his Wall Street Journal and started reading it! Message received. From then on, I gave my recommendation, two or three main arguments and if they wanted more backup I had it and they could ask for it!!!! The best communicators are straightforward!

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The Critical Middle's avatar

I live in the corporate environment. Her style is beyond even that. She sounds like a) a lawyer, which I imagine is her background, as a DA and b) someone who is being very careful not to misspeak, which, as others have pointed out suggests she is not only inauthentic but most importantly, not the one in charge

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